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EDIT: Thanks for the crits! I've changed the proportions (head x body) and lots of little details on their faces! You can see the before/after here:
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And no manga comparison this time. xD

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Good bye manga style :wave: . I had to highlight these characters because it was such a great change O_O

I mean... The "before" drawing is from... Last year!


Salukia Radanth and Liana (c) me.

Also, I've updated my blog ( gisalmeida.blogspot.com ) with some Avaris brand new stuff (and a new character!).
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:iconmalifer:
*Malifer Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
these are really great. nice job.
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:iconholyjennysan:
q liiinda a luka!
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:iconsanxian:
~sanxian Nov 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Gosto mais desse estilo! <3

Li meio por cima os comentários que acham que elas parecem mais velhas do que devem. Acho que na nossa cabeça 12~13 anos tem cara de criança, parece que acabou de sair dos 10 anos, mas as meninas de hoje, aos 13, já estão bem grandes. É só ver a penca de modelos que surgem nessa idade, no? =O

Se tem algo que talvez reforce essa impressão no seu desenho, acho que seria os olhos bem marcados e lábios escuros, que podem remeter à maquiagem. Talvez uma clareada resolva, apesar de eu não achar necessário c:
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:icongisalmeida:
~GisAlmeida Nov 25, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Obrigada!
Sim, e ainda acostumamos com o aspecto supahcute que as meninas de mangá têm e aí fdeu XD

Eu concordo com você, ficou meio com aspecto de maquiagem mesmo. É que na verdade eu tentei fazer umas características indianas, daquelas meninas que parecem que estão sempre de lápis no olho pq tem um negrume muito forte em volta dos olhos.
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~sanxian Nov 25, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Well, se a intenção era esse aspecto indiano, então acho que realmente não há razão pra mudar <3 Lol, agora estou imaginando a Salukia em trajes típicos... Você vai ter que desenhar isso algum hora, heim? 8DD
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:icongisalmeida:
~GisAlmeida Nov 26, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
É uma boa idéia!
Brigada XD
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:iconayuichi:
~ayuICHI Nov 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Super cute and lovely c;
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:icongisalmeida:
~GisAlmeida Nov 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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Mood: Joy *AlineMendes Nov 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
elas ficaram bem melhor nesse seu estilo mais realista, e eu prefiro tons mais escuros d q aqueles muito saturados dos animes. XD
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:iconoutlawjackal:
i wish i could give some decent critique to help you out but me and realism are oil and water still XD
but i have to agree with sheba here, you did an amazing job working your style form manga to realism! the detail is outstanding! and major improvement can be seen from first glance, only thing would be to add less detail on the face i think since the younger a person is the more fat they have on their face and their facial complexion is rounder/smoother , but you´re seriously not too far off its basically perfect!!, but i got a feeling the reason people keep bitching they look older is because anime messed up their perception of age XD in anime a 14 yo looks like an 8/7 yo and their head is 90% eyes

any way!! looove your neww take on your style!! im cheering you on and i hope to see more form you soon!
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